On August 13, I went to sea in Isikawa called Chirihama. It was really hot day. There where many people, they enjoy swimming , jetskii, eating. I went to there with my friend. I got sun burn it was a little painful. At night, we enjoyed fire work. We bouht too much fire work, so it took long time. I was tired. I went to there by car, I drove long time. It made me really tired. In Chirihama, there is dirive way. It is about 8km. We can enjoy drive by car. It takes two and harf hour, not so far . However, it takes much oil money, it is srious problem.
Hey Keita,
Thanks for the update on a fun-sounding summer day. I also had fun this summer, especially on a trip to Universal Studios in Osaka.
Tip: Do you have a photo from that day at the beach? It would be great to see one if you do. Or how about embedding a Google Map? Just go to http://maps.google.com, search for Chilihama, then copy and paste the embed code of the map into this post. This would help people see where you went. Another idea: Is there a website about Chilihama? Adding a hyperlink would be cool, too.
Jerry
PS: Oh- one final point. I strongly suggest you change the title of this blog post. “Summer assignment 1″ sounds like you are only writing this because you HAVE TO, for homework. I know that is the truth, but for the sake of good writing practice, it’s best if the title of a post tells the reader what it will be about. For example, you could say, “Fun in the sun at Chilihama” or “Chilling out at Chilihama”, “A day of sun, sand, and fun at the beach”. Something like that…